It was great!
It didn't make much sense, but ok. I liked it. It should be front page, though.
its not :< i dont think ill ever get front page lol.. :\
I liked it, although mostly because I too have the Bamboo Fun tablet. It was pretty entertaining... even if we have to wait until the music stops to play the easter egg. I actually lol'd when the disk got shredded. For what can be improved... the art. It was very good, but there is always room for improvement, no? You did really well portraying the emotions of the characters, such as when you had big eyes as you saw the tablet. The use of music was perfect in this movie, except for the easter egg glitch, of course. Here is a way to fix it, however: in the actions of the easter egg button, in the line after onRelease or onPress, put " stopAllSounds(); ", and as you may have guessed, all sounds stop as you click the button. You could also put it in the actions of a frame of the easter egg, but it would have to be in one that has no sounds that you actually want played in it, or else they, too will get stopped. To re-upload it, go to My Account > Flash Submissions (Under Flash Portal Options) > Edit (for this flash). I have no idea what process it would have to go through(I've never done it myself), but I assume that it will just replace the current one. Please give me feedback on if this helped you!
Not bad... but not good.
When I first came to this page I thought it would be an animation all about DBZ and over 9000... but I was wrong. Although the beginning and a bit in the end of the movie was DBZ related, it really wasn't. It did include some popular characters, like Alien Hominid and Angry Faic, it was... well, too abstract. The real point of posting on Newgrounds, at least in my opinion, is to provide for the entertainment for others. This animation wasn't very interesting for me at all, I'm sorry. Although I like the song, most of the animations were just simple and bland motion tweens. There were some parts I enjoyed, such as the stick figure, but the rest made the whole movie uninteresting. I understand that you worked hard on this and are proud of your work, but this was overall not something that I would find entertaining at all.
In terms of criticism, the thing that I found so boring was the long scenes of the same thing over and over again. The examples that stand out most include what I believe to be Buu moving his arms up and down, a gray blob breakdancing, and the Angry Faic scene. These are just too repetitive and can easily make the audience lose interest... unless something were to happen that breaks the repetitiveness of the scene. That would make it somewhat more entertaining. The other thing that needs to be criticized is the whole concept of the movie overall... What I, and almost everyone who viewed this thought the movie would be was a DBZ-like movie with DBZ characters and somewhere in it there is "It's over 9000!!!" Instead it was a very strange and abstract music video (if that is an appropriate term to describe this) that had very little to do with DBZ at all.
On a side note... reading the Author Comments above... it, well, seems a little bit too angry and unprofessional. What bugs me the most is the lack of punctuation. It makes the whole thing EXTREMELY irritating to read, and makes it seem like you just put crappy flash on Newgrounds without any effort or care, just to clog up and spam the system. At least, that's what it seems like to me. For everyone to take you seriously, please use punctuation in what you write and try not to blame the reviewers for something that they would not necessarily do. It is one thing to request a meaningful, constructive, and respectful review... but you just come off as being too angry towards us reviewers. Some examples of which are your use of "god damn same" and "if you're so perfect". Those kinds of word choices only infuriate the reviewers and make them want to give you bad reviews. I, for one was appalled by what you wrote in the comments. Just chill out, and if you truly know that one of your flash animations us good, then your reviewers will do the same as well!
and how is it look not effort i used atuaclly charatcer instead of just drawing stick figures. theres nothing wrong with being random i guess people dont get there are lots of random stuff on the web people are like worshipping all im saying is what ever happen to putting a nice polite comment like "it wasnt that great you could use some improvements on your flash next time trie harder" now its like"you suck go kill your selse i fucked your mom you should quit animating"
Not a bad flash animation
The beginning felt pretty long because of the beginning credits, but overall it did pretty well explaining the water cycle. I ROFL'd at the voice "the condensation will begin in 5..4..3..2..1..bye-bye" I thought that voice was funny, I dunno why... I hope you got an A 4 years ago!
I want a piece of that FUNK!
Its funny how the little girl is in every dance scene... just skipping in place there.
Not interesting at all..
It wasn't very interesting... for a couple of reasons...
1. There was no sound, aside from the explosion sounds.
2. The Mario walking scenes were too long, and frankly, a bit boring...
3. His "mistakes" didn't seem like mistakes much at all.
Parts one and two combined are what broke the camel's back, as when Mario is walking in the movie, I almost closed it because I thought you made an endless loop. Next time you make a flash, try shortening it and add more sound. It'll help a lot!
This looks like it will turn out to be a very cool series! Your animation and drawings are good, and the plot looks awesome. The only thing that is strange about the flash is that the princess and her sister survived for 6 days without food or water in the small pod. Most people would die from that, but they are aliens, so I'll cut you some slack. Overall, it is an awesome flash animation!
The ending was hilarious!
Not very good...
You have a pretty good idea with this flash, but it wasn't really well executed. I mean, for starters, Rocky looked more like he was jacking off the punching bag than actually punching it.
MORE APPLE PIE PLEASE!
MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!
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